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    Need Critique for (Very) NSFW TF Piece

    Hey all, I am an aspiring writer and would love some feedback on my semi-long running series Spreading TF. Its full of a ton of sex, but if that doesnt daunt you I could use some critical eyes on my work: https://www.weasyl.com/submission/12...x-part-2-james

    I have other parts but thats as far as I have been able to upload with the time I have onto weasyl. Let me know what you guys think!

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    Junior Prostapheresys's Avatar
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    I found some grammar mistakes littered troughout the text, but otherwise it was a fine kinky/erotica reading

 

 

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