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    Composition Critique? (mild nudity)


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    I really enjoy the overall composition of the piece. The circle almost acts like a giant speech bubble in itself, adding to the crowded discussion. Color is also nice, the shades of blue give a calm, almost depressed mood.

    The only thing I might suggest changing is the speech bubble from her is very hard to read. That might have been intentional given the idea, but the leaves seem to cover it a bit too much.

 

 

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