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    Quote Originally Posted by Antumbra View Post
    Thank you! I'll get to work on those before I started inking.

    Yea I am doing somewhat similar poses for now, but only partially by choice. Part of me still wants to experiment, but I'm really trying to focus more on the character design. I'm kinda afraid of doing a design where I will forget part of it later if I hide it with the pose.
    Oooh okay okay I understand that then. Keep going, you're doing great! :>

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    Love his man muscles, hng~ There's something about his shirt that reminds me of a superheros XD Is that his daughter? ;o

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    Quote Originally Posted by Moogle View Post
    Love his man muscles, hng~ There's something about his shirt that reminds me of a superheros XD Is that his daughter? ;o
    That is actually his little sister, he is very close to her.

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    That's looking really good to me !

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    This sketch is Bliss approved.

    Although seriously, it's looking pretty great ; v ; You're doing better with the zipper, too! Woooo! . v . The foreshortening on the arm is looking pretty great as well :U I'd be a little careful of the hand, though. It looks a little awkward. Kind of long for that viewing angle. I might be wrong, though.
    Also; you did the face pretty well in respect to how it squishes and stretches from interaction with the hand, but I'd say you did the hand at too wide of an angle. It should be a little thinner and you'll see less of the knuckles. The knuckles don't always go in a straight line, they curve outward from the palm as well. You'll probably be able to see up to the third knuckle and the fourth will be gone. That's usually how it goes when hands are at that angle.
    It's still looking great overall! Good job with the folds, too. I still need to work on those ;~;

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    Yee! This is awesome! C: I like this. Also I retake my comments about the hands. They look much better now than they did.
    ALTHOUGH. Two quick things.
    I'm not sure exactly how to fix it, but things don't look right on the right half of the picture and my first thought is to make a shadow moving outwards where his elbow upwards are. I think it just looks... flat? otherwise. Like his arm isn't actually on the table, it's a piece of color behind the arm. It's weird. That's my suggestion for that.
    Also, similar thing on the left side with the elbow. Maybe add a shadow around it? :s I'm not entirely sure how to fix it, but watch those two little spots.
    Last edited by BlissfulOblivion; 08-19-2014 at 11:27 PM.

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    I totally agree, the shadows look super wrong on that table for both arms. I'll try to fix it tonight.

    Thanks Bliss!

 

 

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