Any critiques for this before I move on?

[Amaranth]

[Sammacha]

[wwretched]

I really think using line weights will really help you out here. The fur on the neck is a bit thick and the texture is a bit distracting, perhaps simplifying into larger chunks will help. Or if you'd like to keep the texture as is, add more line weight elsewhere to balance it out--you've got a lot of black there and it feels too unbalanced. In addition, the fur on the back of the neck that goes onto the back should spill onto the sides a bit, right now it looks like there's this huge chunk sitting straight up like it's been spiked and having it fall and sort of flow into the back would really add a bit of realism.

I think Sammacha did a nice job of the redlines, I'm not sure if there's anything else I can add. Good work so far!

[QT Melon]

I think varying the hair lines a bit will go a long way. Right now it looks all the same.

[Amaranth]

Thank you all for the input! I appreciate it, and it has helped me learn from this!

[Sammacha]

Are you still working on it?