I figured since I've started to get back into writing that I would get some critique on the latest piece I wrote. It's a transformation story if you happen to like that sort of thing.

https://www.weasyl.com/submission/40...imply-purrfect

I think I've got a good thing going so far with this and I hope in the future I'll be able to take commissions to earn some extra money.

So yay or nay?