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  1. #21
    Design wise it looks pretty good, the problem is that it looks quite chubby or too muscular so the anatomy had its problems. QT Melon actually is really good step in the right direction, the proportions are a lot better in there. You could work with those adjustments to finish this piece. Good luck with that.

  2. #22
    Quote Originally Posted by AineCleine View Post
    Design wise it looks pretty good, the problem is that it looks quite chubby or too muscular so the anatomy had its problems. QT Melon actually is really good step in the right direction, the proportions are a lot better in there. You could work with those adjustments to finish this piece. Good luck with that.
    Yes, QT did a great job!
    I was trying to make him look powerful since he was a battle horse, but maybe I did a bit too much. The next one should show some great improvement. Thank you for the input

  3. #23
    Hi guys,
    Just wanted to bump the thread the thank you all for the help
    My new one is here, https://www.weasyl.com/submission/43...-horse-daiyu-2
    Your crit really helped me with both the proportions of the head and chest as well as the lighting.
    I will be back for sure at another time, and I will lock this thread later tonight.

    I will draw a background next time ...

 

 

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