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    It's kind of dark :s It's a little hard for me to make out much detail at all. I can barely even see where the sides are, and I cant tell if it has a top or not. I know it's supposed to be dark but it's kind of like there's not enough contrast to make it clear.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BlissfulOblivion View Post
    It's kind of dark :s
    Thanks for the feedback. I personally put up the brightness of my screen when drawing it, so I might need to take that into consideration.
    Atm I've only really done the front gate, so the light gradient there is how it should be in the total piece. I'll keep the contrast in mind. Thanks! <3

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    Quote Originally Posted by Velo View Post
    Thanks for the feedback. I personally put up the brightness of my screen when drawing it, so I might need to take that into consideration.
    Atm I've only really done the front gate, so the light gradient there is how it should be in the total piece. I'll keep the contrast in mind. Thanks! <3
    Hmm. That's definitely a better part but I thiiink you might be able to go at least a liiiiittle bit more. Not sure though. Show when you've done more! <:

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    Quote Originally Posted by BlissfulOblivion View Post
    Hmm. That's definitely a better part but I thiiink you might be able to go at least a liiiiittle bit more. Not sure though. Show when you've done more! <:
    Thanks, I'll show it as soon as I've done a bit more work on that image! It's just a bit busy atm with my exams >.>


    Tried to do a dynamic pose to get a bit more flow and perspective. I know there are a lot of mistakes in the anatomy, but I just seem not able to pinpoint them all.
    I know the torso (his right) is to stretched out, but can't say how much exactly...
    And the neck, head is wrongly attached?
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    Quote Originally Posted by BlissfulOblivion View Post
    épais et trapu
    The only two words I didn't really got, but there's google translate to do the job for those words. :p
    Thanks for the feedback, I'll try to tweak up the pose! You gave some great advice <3
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    Bien sūr ! c: jsuis hereuse que je pouvais t'aider ! <:

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    Last edited by Velo; 01-28-2014 at 05:37 PM.

 

 

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