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    Quote Originally Posted by Velo View Post
    I think you should watch out with the proportions and foreshortening of the legs and the right arm. (Holding the book)
    If you're looking front view, you won't see much of the upper leg. If you're looking from a bit from above, you won't see that much off the upper part of his legs, because it's covered by the table's view. Samples X,X
    You could only see the crotch area when you are looking straight at it like seen is this sample. I'm not good at explaining D':
    Pretty much this. Also, watch the table. If you're really looking head-on, it's gonna be very thin and you're going to mostly just see the side of it and not much of the top. See here, you see some of the top but it's very oblong and thin. The entire shape is going to be pretty thin. Velo explained the rest of it pretty well.

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    Thanks Velo, those links helped.

    Part of the table was meant to be the side, it'll make more sense in color.

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    The arm is definitely better but you could make the perspective on the legs even more extreme. From that angle you should barely be able to see the thighs at all, just where the torso connects to the hips. Keep going though! :3

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    Much better! Well done! :D

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    Nice!

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    heyaaa! nice to see a sketchbook here!

    Looking at your last piece, I noticed the perspective was off, and though you've moved on I thought you would like the resource anyway!

    For the table, the eye level that we see the top of the table is a lot deeper than the table stands show, so it creates a skewed perspective. To get an idea of what I'm talking about here's a link:

    http://sashas.deviantart.com/art/Per...eview-52633664 <--- go to "eye to eye" and look at the circle examples on the right of the text to get an idea of what I mean.

    Hope this was useful, and hope to see more here soon!

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