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    Damn, Hewge! That's huge improvement you're showing here! c:

    The only critique I can give on the drawing would be that the arms seem like they're a bit too short (rather than foreshortened?), which is mostly so with the arm on the viewer's left. I could be wrong, but it feels like the elbow shouldn't be pointing outward as much, if you're going for foreshortening.

    And mostly a nitpick, but there's a bit of inconsistent lighting in terms of where you highlighted. Just a question, but where is the light-source intended to come from?

    Otter than that, it's looking good. :3

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    Your coloring has improved from your previous attempts. I know there's still some issues with the anatomy, but I really like how nicely you chose your browns against the blue background. It is mainly because the scapula are such landmark parts of the back, it seems to be missing from your otter dude. (Scapula are the shoulder blades you see on the back).

    http://www.cea1.com/anatomy-sistems/...-neck-anatomy/

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    The snout looks nice.

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    There's that leap and there's the fact you aren't using Purple background so we are no longer purple buddy.

    That leap though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hardrockangel View Post
    Damn, Hewge! That's huge improvement you're showing here! c:

    The only critique I can give on the drawing would be that the arms seem like they're a bit too short (rather than foreshortened?), which is mostly so with the arm on the viewer's left. I could be wrong, but it feels like the elbow shouldn't be pointing outward as much, if you're going for foreshortening.

    And mostly a nitpick, but there's a bit of inconsistent lighting in terms of where you highlighted. Just a question, but where is the light-source intended to come from?

    Otter than that, it's looking good. :3
    Holy crap! I had no idea you said this, sorry. Like, I seriously didn't see your post at all until just now... I feel so derpy. :[

    You're right. His arms do seem a little short. As if they don't reach the proper thigh-length.
    As for the lighting, I think I was going for the source being mostly from the top-right. I just have a lot more practice and studies I need to do. xD
    Mmmh otter puns~

    And- many thanks Teal and Zeitz! I hope my quest to move away from the toony-toons is slowly working.
    Also Zeitz; your avatar has no purples, so you broke the pact first.
    Last edited by Hewge; 01-20-2014 at 05:52 AM.

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    Ooooooh that stuff is pretty! :U

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    Last edited by Hewge; 02-04-2014 at 06:38 AM.

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