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Hello! I updated my super out-of-date first post with new info, so check that out!
I wanted to have the example images show up as images, but it looks like this website blanks out posts with images,...

Commissions are still open!
Here's some ones I have done recently.

https://cdn.weasyl.com/static/media/0b/56/46/0b5646c9080da1ec7c3384dd044f601fbda1a827baa105d86b27d8874b720e9f.gif...

EDIT: I'm okay with being commissioned to draw humans now, but still NO NSFW

It's been a while since I posted here... whooops.

The first post is now super outdated because now I'm using...

Hello! Commissions are still open, but at the moment I am focusing on doodle commissions. They're the same place as listed above, and some recent examples of colored doodles are:...

(BASE) PRICES AND EXAMPLES

https://66.media.tumblr.com/4aeb8822be7288f82cf2543634699b7c/tumblr_pgf85baGmJ1vato9zo3_1280.png...

I really like that Weasyl Fantasia idea! I would love to help with ideas on that if that gets started (and I can think of what to add onto it. :P). The Commissions list account sounds cool too, but...

If the body isn't solid, some of the background should shine through and it should still be shaded according to the light-source.
As for the hair being part of the fur or not, the advice still...

Thanks for that visual! I had a feeling I messed up on the shading of the dress... lol

The ghost's body doesn't have "proper" shading to the light source cause I used to do that but I feel how I...

The point isn't that it doesn't look terrible, it's that your lines could look better.


If you want it to look like FLCL or...that other one, you're going to need to work on your lines a lot,...

If it's what you like doing I believe we hit a dead end. The problem is you asked if you were ready for commissions. I think you should just draw what you want and enjoy doing it. There isn't really...

I will try to describe it better. I'm getting frustrated with the comments right now because they're just barking phrases at the OP and no explanation. I don't think that's helpful as a critique....

Really, I'm content with the lines now so I don't think I should make any more changes... I'd get some examples but for other's it's mostly cause I like how they use it but I wouldn't use it myself...

I did your question form, cause I figure I should give back to the critique forum.

I have to say, the two things you've posted in this thread are a really big improvement on the art I've looked at...

Just finished another quick-ish test drawing.. The brush settings are a bit changed from the last one and I like them a bit more now and I tried somewhat different shading... The background color...

What I mean is you can use any tool (you have to learn how to of course) but it's better to use BETTER tools.


You need to practice shading. It doesn't look right.

What's wrong with it besides...

Yes, but it's still easier and better to use an xacto knife than a pair of child's scissors.

That does look better OP, still crumbly but not as much.

So in that drawing where is your light...

Well, I tried to make new brush settings... I'm not so sure on them though... I did make a quick-ish colored drawing with the new settings:
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True, but the stabilize can help those who have really shaky hands.


The linework looked like MSPaint. Instead of little lines, or going over the same spot repeatedly try long, sweeping lines.
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While it may be a stylistic choice to you, to others is looks messy and unfinished.
Like a sketch that was colored in.

What program do you use?

I use Paint Tool SAI.


Well they are wobbly...

I don't have time to fill out the form now but a quick look through your Weasyl gallery I got this: the majority of the characters are facing the same direction.

Your lines need work, they look...

That thing about the different styles and symbols of what people think things look like and the lighting tutorial is great!


As for your work, I also think you should look into anatomy and line...

I've sent in a form for you. If you need more details concerning any of my responses, I'd be more than happy to elaborate. c:

Thanks for filling out the form! I do have one thing to mention...

(Not sure what exactly to call it..)

Hello! Sorry if this isn't in the right area I couldn't decide if this goes in Art General or Critique if it's allowed to be posted at all. This is not...