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Alaksi
08-17-2015, 03:35 PM
Hi!
This is what I'm working on right now (Fury Road was such a great movie, I just had to draw something from it), the lineart is mostly finished but I'd like some feedback before I start coloring:
http://i.imgur.com/J9gNI7a.jpg

I just know that something is wrong with the wheels but no matter what I do they always look terrible. And what is even going on with that guys face. I have been looking at this for too long. Help?

Zeitzbach
08-18-2015, 03:03 AM
The front wheel. Everything else is already good.

http://i.imgur.com/qU02evq.png

As long as the wheel is moved along the line, you can adjust at will to keep the head of the car wider or thinner.

Unless his car was supposed to be like that cause I didn't watch the movie.

Alaksi
08-18-2015, 02:21 PM
Thank you! I'll follow your advice and fix that