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Kopatropa
04-19-2015, 03:15 PM
I've decided that I'm gonna ask for some critiques one last time, just to see where I am in my art.

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Be as harsh as possible.

Noxid
04-19-2015, 03:16 PM
these links are broken?

Kopatropa
04-19-2015, 03:34 PM
these links are broken?

They're fixed.

Antumbra
04-19-2015, 05:25 PM
Taking a look at your gallery, I like that you are trying different expressions and also trying poses that aren't straight shots at the front or side of the characters.

I would definitely suggest practicing shadows, like maybe drawing some still-life's . It would help give the pictures some depth. Also not how lines curve with the shape of the object. I'm on my phone or I would show a redline, but like on the bands of the tail on the underwater pic; the lines are drawn straight, but if they are around the tail they would be curved, which also helps give some depth.

What program are you using to draw these?

Kopatropa
04-19-2015, 10:19 PM
What program are you using to draw these?

Paint.NET