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therainbowtroll
08-15-2014, 01:57 PM
Hey there

I recently finished something and I would love some feedback. I tried diffrent things in terms of coloring.

Here it is

https://www.weasyl.com/submission/698386/eat-me


Any tutorials for sai is apprecited!

Antumbra
08-15-2014, 07:55 PM
Nice piece! I like the new coloring method.

The lines look good and clean and the subject is very cool and interesting! It has a ton of personality and kind of reminds me of some sweet graffiti.

A couple of things I would suggest is to push the colors a little more. I like where it is going and pushing the pink shadows and the tongue/bow shades will help make it pop more.

The only real flaw I saw was the bottom jaw was missing from the far end. Here is a red line on it:
http://i1316.photobucket.com/albums/t602/Antumbra/Untitled-1_zps09b804b5.jpg

From that angle you would see part of the other cheek, jaw, and row of teeth.


Overall great pic! You should post stuff more often!

therainbowtroll
08-18-2014, 07:03 PM
Aw thanks!

Thanks for the suggestions :) I will keep that inmind next time I draw her mouth.