View Full Version : Started Writing Again

Mekali Kaga
01-25-2014, 09:52 PM
I figured since I've started to get back into writing that I would get some critique on the latest piece I wrote. It's a transformation story if you happen to like that sort of thing.


I think I've got a good thing going so far with this and I hope in the future I'll be able to take commissions to earn some extra money.

So yay or nay?